Book Reviews: Genre-specific Technical Communication

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Regine Hampel and Ursula Stickler, eds. New York, NY: Bloomsbury Academic. 2024.

The Bloomsbury Handbook of Language Learning and Technology

Regine Hampel and Ursula Stickler, eds. New York, NY: Bloomsbury Academic. 2024. 512 pages, including index.

Index Terms: digital technologies, language-technology interface, pedagogical innovations, practice and theory, technology enhanced language learning

Reviewed by Li Xin, Professor at Shanghai International Studies University (26@shisu.edu.cn).

The Bloomsbury Handbook of Language Learning and Technology is a well-timed publication given the rapid evolution of language-technology interface and the explosion of interest in using technological resources in the language classroom. By exploring how particular approaches to teaching and learning can be facilitated by technologies, this handbook offers unique insights on the integration of technology as a central part in the language teaching profession.

The contributions make a strong case that digital technology has significantly changed the landscape of language learning. Technology-enhanced language learning (TELL) has caused a phase shift in education, disrupting the traditional parameters of learning and teaching. With key technological innovations making their way into education, new priorities and trends are bound to emerge regarding the tools and practices for language comprehension, production, and interaction.

Preceded by the editors’ Introduction, this volume is thematically divided into six parts. Part I, “CALL through the Ages,” foregrounds the change and continuity within the field of TELL/CALL (Computer-Assisted Language Learning). Chapter 1 chose the journal On-CALL to illustrate how far CALL has grown in its breadth and depth and in the technologies it now embraces. Chapter 2 distinguishes the role of technology in language learning as a tool and as a tutor. Chapter 3 reviews tutorial CALL, which emphasizes the direct interaction of the learner with the computer as differentiated from the communicative and learning interaction of students through the computer. Chapter 4 provides an overview of the accelerated adoption of educational technologies prompted by the pandemic.

Part II, “Theories in CALL,” consists of seven chapters. The authors agree that as the field looks to a future of continuing changes, technology has changed what needs to be theorized to explicate the effect of digital technologies in the contemporary world. Specifically, Chapters 5 and 6 introduce second language acquisition theories and sociocultural theories for CALL. Chapter 7 and 8 discuss Multimodality and (Multi)literacies for enhanced language learning with technology. Chapters 9 and 10 focus on ecological perspectives on CALL and motivation and autonomy. Chapter 11 demonstrates the use of social media in formal contexts as a means for language learners to develop cultural competencies through critical social media literacies.

Part III, “Digital and online technologies transforming language learning and teaching,” asserts that successful digital conversion for classrooms is not determined by the technology, but by how technology enables teaching and learning. In chapter order, the authors examine how Digital Screen Mediation facilitates target language comprehension and production, the benefits and shortcomings of Language Massive Open Online Courses, the impact of web-based machine translation on modern foreign language learning and teaching, the existing classroom practices in data-driven learning, the potential and limitations of implementing augmented and virtual reality technologies in second and foreign language learning, and the ways the Maker culture and design thinking can contribute meaningfully to CALL practice and technology-mediated language learning.

Part IV, “Moving the learner online,” sets out to prove that preparing learners to leverage online resources for the purpose of language learning and authentic communication is no trivial task. Despite the rich opportunities virtual exchange offers for intercultural and cross-cultural experiences, and the presence of social media as a discursive space where each user can be fully agentive in their identity expression, there is urgency to engage learners in social justice-oriented agendas through TELL.

Part V, “Research methodologies and methods,” seeks to uncover why drawing insights from fields beyond second language acquisition (SLA) can help us make better sense of second or foreign language learning in complex technology-mediated environments. These single or integrated models and frameworks appropriated from associated domains include activity theory, multimodality and translanguaging, n/ethnography, Social Network Analysis, and eye tracking research. Application of their main tenets and approaches not only expands horizons in technology-enhanced SLA but also raises critical issues related to the CALL/TELL fields.

Part VI, “Teachers’ needs and initiatives,” is directed at the teaching community as opposed to the research community. Chapter 29 explores the fusion of online teaching modalities and digital interactive platforms within traditional in-person face-to-face learning in K-12 contexts. Chapter 30 synthesizes the literature on digital multimodal pedagogy with pre-/in-service language teachers and evaluates the main methodologies in this domain. Chapter 31 provides case studies, pedagogies, and tips for those practitioners wanting to apply some of the novel TELL approaches.

This handbook is intended for practitioners and researchers alike, the contributions within explore research, practice, and theory of language learning and teaching; three foundational pillars of applied linguistics; and the cross-fertilization of the trio in a variety of digitalized contexts.

First, this volume has reported convergence and divergence among multiple research projects involving teachers as TELL designers and has endeavored to extend existing knowledge to strengthen TELL as a research field. Through an extensive literature review, it underscores the importance of applying research to inform and support the use of established and emerging technologies; articulates the pressing issues that language learning in the digital age has posed to learners, teachers, and researchers; and proposes recommendations for TELL research in the digital realms.

Second, language teachers today are faced with so many fascinating options for using technology to enhance language learning that it can be overwhelming. To familiarize language teachers with different digital tools and enhance their teaching practices, thus making something overwhelming more manageable, this volume has not only dedicated considerable space to describing the technical features and functions of specific digital tools, but more importantly, to evaluating the pedagogical compatibility of the tools for language teaching. Technology can only have a positive effect on language learning when its potential capacities are fully incorporated into pedagogy and curriculum.

Third, this volume presents a lucid, compelling argument that to substantiate claims about TELL, it is imperative to establish the meaning of “enhanced”, what constitutes an enhancement of the learning and teaching experience, and the different ways in which enhancement is conceived. The contributors employ case studies and empirical evidence to strengthen and clarify these theoretical considerations. By establishing a clear connection between the forms of technology that are accessible and relevant notions and principles, it enables readers to understand how digital practices can be effectively implemented to indeed “enhance” pedagogical practices and contribute to student learning through increased opportunities for participation and through applying language skills to higher order thinking tasks.

This edited volume would have been more comprehensive if the range of discussions could involve informal and incidental learning as well. How learners have benefited from out-of-class technology-supported contact with the target language is an animated area of research that has received close attention from scholars in South Korea, China, Sweden, Saudi Arabia, and Kazakhstan and requires ongoing attention from TELL researchers and practitioners to complement the formal learning contexts. Also, to ensure a more robust comparison between the effectiveness of TELL and non-TELL for acquisition, it could reveal how learners’ sub-skills such as grammar and vocabulary were enhanced through specific pedagogically sound TELL practices, and to what extent the age and gender of learners could affect the design, implementation, and assessment of technology. Using quantitative and mixed methods, two of the most frequently employed methodological approaches, this can help identify the differentiated applicability of technology- and non-technology-based activities for assisting each component of language learning and address the absence of distinction involving learner factors. Finally, as a teacher and researcher of English as a Foreign Language writing, I would expect updated accounts along the line of computer-mediated diagnostic writing research, for example, a close examination of how teachers provide written corrective feedback through the application of AI-driven technology.
We can see that The Bloomsbury Handbook of Language Learning and Technology is a major work that will enhance the scholarship of both budding and seasoned teachers and researchers. By expounding on the productive relationship between new technologies and language teaching and learning and identifying the specific roles that technology plays in enhancing teaching and learning, it inspires practitioners, educational developers, and policy makers alike to fully address recent advances and future directions in the field. As such, it is a noteworthy contribution that fulfills the need of the education sector on a global scale.

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The Working Voice: Vocal Health and Effective Communication 

Stephanie Martin and Olivia Darnley. New York, NY: Routledge. 2024. 338 pages, including index.

Index Terms—effective communication, professional skills, vocal health, voice production

Reviewed by Ardia Pramesti Nurfahmi, Student, Universitas Gadjah Mada, supported by Lembaga Pengelola Dana Pendidikan (LPDP), Indonesia.

The Working Voice: Vocal Health and Effective Communication presents a comprehensive guide for professionals who rely on their voice. This guide covers vocal aspects such as posture, tension release, breathing, resonance, volume, intonation, and effective communication, offering practical ways to enhance skills and maintain vocal health. Self-assessment tools like checklists, questionnaires, and exercises help identify and address vocal challenges. The guide also emphasizes safe and structured practices for achieving vocal health, quality, and authentic presence.

The book explores message organization in rhetoric, highlighting flexible techniques for diverse communication contexts to ensure logical, persuasive, and engaging message structures. It addresses vocal frustrations, fatigue, and inefficiencies resulting from repeated explanations in professional scenarios, stressing the need for high-quality and easily understandable communication methods.

Stephanie Martin and Olivia Darnley highlighted several effective best practices, including the “Safe Screaming” technique, which focuses on increasing vocal volume without damaging the vocal cords. By paying attention to aspects of voice production such as safe breath support and reducing laryngeal tension, individuals can strengthen their voice effectively and safely. Additionally, promoting the 4-7-8 breath technique enhances vocal control with exercises promoting relaxation and stress reduction while emphasizing tension release in the tongue, jaw, and shoulders to improve overall sound quality. Integrating these practices into daily routines helps professionals develop a healthy, expressive voice, supporting effective communication and maintaining vocal health at work.

The book’s strength lies in its comprehensive guidance that blends expert insights, practical exercises, and self-assessment tools to improve vocal performance and professional communication skills. While it provides deep discussions on key aspects of voice production and quality, such as posture, breathing techniques, and resonance, it could benefit from more in-depth coverage of specific vocal disorders and challenges faced by professionals, as well as real-life case studies or examples to enhance application across various work situations.

Overall, The Working Voice serves as an indispensable guide for professionals reliant on their voices, offering practical exercises, self-assessment tools, and expert insights to enhance vocal performance and communication skills. Readers will learn to master breathing techniques, resonance, and voice modulation, developing confident and effective vocal presence across diverse scenarios, thereby fostering greater career success.

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Pencil (Object Lessons)

Carol Beggy. New York, NY: Bloomsbury Academic. 2024. 138 pages, including index.

Index Terms—writing technology, history of writing tools
Reviewed by Michelle Gardner

Pencil is one in a series of books about the hidden lives of ordinary things. Called Object Lessons, each book starts from a specific inspiration like an historical event, a literary passage, a personal narrative, or a technological innovation. Carol Beggy chose to expose the pencil, a writing implement that has kept its current form for more than three hundred and fifty years.

Reading Pencil brought back childhood memories about their colors and designs, decorative eraser toppers, and pencil cases with built-in sharpeners. And competing to have the most awe-inspiring, envy-inducing, and neatly organized collection. And pondering whether classmates were trustworthy enough to return a borrowed pencil in its original condition.

But pencils aren’t just for students. They are used by animators and artists, novelists and poets, authors and playwrights, composers and musicians, engineers and librarians, and the list goes on. Based on Beggy’s research and writing, these folks have opinions about their pencils. They know when they need a Blackwing 602, a Cedar Pointe #333 2HB, a Musgrave Single Barrel 106, or a Dixon Ticonderoga. Pencil choices are plentiful and there’s one out there that’s the perfect fit for the job.

Chapter 6, “Collectors Versus Users,” tackles questions like, “When does one become a collector?” and “At what point do all these pencils I have become a collection?” (p. 57). The answer to the first question might be when you pay $2,000 for a pencil made by Henry David Thoreau’s family company or join the American Pencil Collectors Society (APCS). The answer to the second question is probably when you have a story for how or why the pencils were acquired or you’ve designated a beneficiary.

Speaking of Thoreau, Beggy takes us to Authors Ridge in the back corner of the historic Sleepy Hollow Cemetery in Concord, Massachusetts. Thoreau’s headstone measures “about two-unsharpened-pencils across and the same height at the center peak” (p. 82). His grave is often covered with pencils and other items that evoke his life’s work. It’s fascinating that a pencil can even be used to pay one’s respects.

Pencil is a quick read (113 pages in 10 chapters), and an interesting exploration of where and how pencils are made, what sets them apart from each other, and how they maintain their usefulness and appeal in a world inundated with technology. After all, there’s a reason that an estimated two billion pencils are made worldwide every year.

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Business Writing with AI

Sheryl Lindsell-Roberts. New York, NY: John Wiley and Sons, Inc. 2024. 370 pages, including index.

Index Terms—artificial intelligence, business writing, creativity and expertise, writing process

Reviewed by Michelle Gardner

Business Writing with AI by Sheryl Lindsell-Roberts is a comprehensive guide for novice and experienced business communicators. The book offers valuable insights into using artificial intelligence (AI) to enhance business writing, while emphasizing that AI should not replace human intelligence (WI).

The book is structured into 24 chapters where you’ll find a great sampling of the different artificial intelligence (AI) sources you might want to consult in using AI to help create your draft, although you should never rely on it as the complete source of truth. A recommended reading sequence is to start with the Introduction and then read Part 2 (chapters 4–9) to master the writing process. These chapters cover understanding readers, crafting stories, writing drafts, designing for visual impact, honing tone, and polishing prose.

Lindsell-Roberts introduces the WI concept by highlighting that while AI can assist with efficiency and knowledge, it cannot replace the human touch essential for effective communication. She stresses that AI tools should be used to supplement, not replace, human creativity and expertise for those in copywriting and advertising, public relations, journalism and reporting, marketing, freelance, proposal, grant, technical, medical, legal, academic and research, and web content.

For technical communicators, Lindsell-Roberts shares that AI “may not be able to replace the creativity and expertise that people bring to the table. Additionally, user manuals, process documents, statements of work, standard operating procedures, and such often require a high degree of accuracy and clarity, which may be difficult for AI to achieve” (p. 15). Lindsell-Roberts advises that writers should always validate AI-generated content to ensure it meets the needs of their audience. When I use AI to write user stories, I provide a hypothetical situation and then review the given response. I then have a different perspective from this writing assistant to consider on what to accept, reject, or rewrite.

Business Writing with AI discusses various AI applications in writing, such as generating content, enhancing tone, fact-checking, and building tables of content, glossaries, and indexes. AI can help overcome writer’s block by generating outlines, exploring different angles, and improving vocabulary. It can also assist with visual content by analyzing data, suggesting design improvements, and customizing content for specific audiences.

Despite its strengths, the book has some drawbacks, including typos, grammatical issues, and inaccurate URLs for AI tools. Additionally, it lacks an appendix or web companion listing all the referenced AI tools.

Business Writing with AI is a good, yet weak due to the drawbacks mentioned, resource for those wanting to improve their business writing skills, with practical tips on integrating AI to enhance the writing process. Lindsell-Roberts has written many other For Dummies series books on technical writing and other subjects that are far more superior than this one. Don’t discredit this book because of its drawbacks; you may find something useful in it you may not have known about, especially regarding AI.

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Writers’ Mistakes: A Handbook of Common Blunders and Ways to Mend Them

Franklin B. Olmsted. Lanham, MD: Rowman & Littlefield. 2024. 257 pages, including index.

Index Terms—concise writing, editing techniques, grammatical errors, language improvement, writing mistakes

Reviewed by—Joanne DeVoir, Information Development Manager, Minitab LLC.

Writers’ Mistakes: A Handbook of Common Blunders and Ways to Mend Them is a comprehensive review of writing mistakes and how to correct them. I was pleasantly surprised to learn that Franklin B. Olmsted is not a professional writer or educator but is a criminal defense attorney. The governor of Maryland appointed Olmsted to a committee that worked to modernize and re-write state laws to be more understandable. Olmsted’s life-long interest in language and writing is evident on every page.

Writers’ Mistakes contains five chapters that cover ill-chosen words, needless words, awkward sentences, problematic paragraphs, and common grammatical mistakes. The ill-chosen words chapter is a hefty ninety pages and examines issues with abstract nouns, overuse of adjectives, and unnecessarily pretentious words. One of my favorite parts of this chapter is Olmsted’s discussion of malaprops (the misuse of a word by confusing it with another word that sounds similar). The needless words section covers redundant words and meaningless words and phrases. The awkward sentences chapter discusses common causes of such sentences, including passive voice, nonparallel writing, punctuation issues, and sentences that are too long or too complicated. The problematic paragraph content is a brief review of how to avoid paragraphs that are too long or contain too many ideas. The last chapter explains common grammatical mistakes, such as issues with singular and plural words, misuse of “who” and “whom,” and adjectives used as adverbs.

Olmsted illustrates each type of writing error with an impressive number of examples from a variety of genres, including legal and historical documents, works of fiction, and newspaper articles. For each example of a mistake, the author shows how to improve the writing by changing a few words, deleting unnecessary words, or re-writing the sentence altogether. Throughout Writers’ Mistakes, Olmsted uses tables that list common mistakes and a much-improved alternative. I plan to refer to these tables in the future.

I appreciate that Olmsted includes an appendix to define punctuation marks. This information is a nice refresher and reference. I was also glad that the book features a glossary to define terms that I have not thought about since high school English class, such as auxiliary verb, coordinate clause, and relative pronoun.

I was delighted by the humor sprinkled throughout the book. I chuckled when Olmsted discusses the pitfalls of passive voice and writes “we needn’t speak or write as if it came from some disembodied being in the sky” (p. 152). I also appreciate his descriptive names for writing mistakes such as “reckless U-turns” (double negatives) and “windbag sentences” (cluttered sentences).

Writers’ Mistakes is a fun read for any serious lover of the English language and an excellent reference for how to write more clearly, concisely, and accurately.

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Rewriting Work

Lora Anderson, ed. Boulder, CO: The WAC Clearinghouse. 2023. 182 pages.

Index Terms—freelance work, professional communication job market, technical communication, workplace adaptability

Reviewed by—Linda M. Davis, Independent Communications Practitioner.

Rewriting Work reports on research in workplace technical communication practices. Although field research and academic programs have a history of collaboration, academic programs, for various reasons, may encounter difficulties in keeping current. To help remedy this, the authors represented in this book have conducted “research into 21st-century workplaces in order to capture…evolutions…in the workplace, workplace writing, and writers’ identities” (p. 5).

The book is broken into seven chapters, each of which highlights the work of different researchers who approach the subject of rewriting work from a different angle. Each chapter is self-contained, including a bibliography, making it easy for the reader to find a topic of interest.

Rewriting Work begins with researchers whose goal is defining the concept of the workplace, acknowledging that research over the past four decades has lacked a unified definition. The authors propose a working definition to ensure long-term applicability and relevance for both academics and practitioners. In another study on workplace, the author explores how the location of the workplace impacts communication, emphasizing the significance of “where-ness” in producing effective communications.

The discussion moves to phatic communication in large, fast-paced organizations, contrasting it with what happens in classroom settings. The author aims to expose students to modern workplace practices and technologies. Other researchers address the growing number of freelance, contract, and gig workers, examining the challenges they face and suggesting ways to enhance collaboration between freelancers and clients. Insights from technical communication leaders at the university of two authors reveal the evolving state of the profession and highlight the need to bridge the gap between academic research and practice.

Researchers in workplace adaptability introduce a model of functional flexibility for technical teams, advocating for a collective approach to overcoming barriers. Finally, researchers of the professional communication job market provide practical advice for entry-level job seekers by analyzing employment ads, offering tips on understanding job requirements, and applying academic experiences to meet employer expectations.

I found Rewriting Work to be interesting as it provides up-to-date information on what’s going on in many varied technical communication workplaces and jobs that were new to me and may be new experiences for the reader.

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Knowledge-Making from a Postgraduate Writers’ Circle: A Southern Reflectory

Lucia Thesen. Bristol, United Kingdom: Multilingual Matters. 2024. 152 pages, including index.

Index Terms—knowledge-making, radical vulnerability, trace archive, transmodal moments

Reviewed by—Reid Johnson, Student, Technical Communication & Rhetoric, Texas Tech Universit

Writers, whether they’re writing in an academic or industry setting, know too well that the final product of the writing process represents a highly curated and streamlined account of their own knowledge-making efforts. For every completed thesis, proposal, or journal article there are countless conversations, drafts, scribbled half-ideas, and moments of joy or frustration that never see publication. In Knowledge-Making from a Postgraduate Writers’ Circle: A Southern Reflectory, Lucia Thesen seeks to uncover the discarded byproducts of the writing process, materials that make up what she calls the “trace archive” (p. 4), to challenge the binaries of product and waste, knowledge and not knowledge.

Thesen’s book is driven by an ethnographic account of the Thursday writers’ circle, a writing group for graduate and postgraduate students at the University of Cape Town. First established in 2006, Thesen facilitated the circle for many years, notably through the #MustFall protests and larger movement for decolonization in South African universities. As a writer and academic from the global South, Thesen interrogates how knowledge-making is performed from a marginalized position and hopes to disrupt the hegemonic commodification of academic knowledge. Using strategies informed by radical vulnerability and collaboration, Thesen seeks to resist the disembodied, objective voice of traditional academic writing for something human and true to the messy knowledge-making process.

To demonstrate what this type of knowledge-making can look like, Thesen introduces materials from the trace archive to inform her work in this book. Rather than presenting her reader with an objective bird’s eye view of the Thursday writers’ circle, she instead includes transcripts of her notes and reflections on her role as a facilitator. These reflections convey a passion and sense of fulfillment from the work the circle accomplishes, but they also communicate anxiety and frustration with the daily administrative tasks. The notion that a writers’ circle would be a utopian safe space is also dismantled through Thesen’s messy accounts, instead casting it as a “brave space” (p. 19) that invites participants to sit in discomfort and practice vulnerability.

Besides breaks for reflections, Knowledge-Making from a Postgraduate Writers’ Circle is also interspersed with images and sketches from Thesen’s notes and the circles’ archives. Unlike the polished figures and data visualizations that feature in academic literature, the sketches possess a charmingly amateur quality to them. Framed as transmodal moments that invite readers to briefly shift affect and emphasis in the larger stream of text, sketches that played a role in the knowledge-making process are given life in publication instead of being relegated to a long-forgotten notebook or pile of scrap paper. These moments allow readers to reflect on the absurdity of objective, impersonal writing by making the human author apparent.

Knowledge-Making from a Postgraduate Writers’ Circle does not claim to serve as a pedagogical blueprint for establishing a writer’s circle, but instead invites readers to imagine the possibilities of writing in a way that truly honors the writing and knowledge-making process.

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How Writing Made Us Human, 3000 BCE to Now

Walter Stephens. Baltimore, MD: Johns Hopkins University Press. 2024. 532 pages.

Index Terms—authenticity, philosophy, writing evolution

Reviewed by—Steven Darian, Emeritus, Rutgers University.

We can glimpse its evolution in Mesopotamia, In the scribes’ efforts to change cuneiform from nothing more than a method of bookkeeping, to a way of immortalizing the great deeds of their kings (p. xii). The same with hieroglyphics: It was only around 2000 BCE that the Egyptian system indicated how to pronounce hieroglyphic signs.

“These centuries witnessed the development from oral to written storytelling, expanding from myth and legend toward something that begins to resemble history” (p. xiii).

This takes us to “The Age of Philosophy;” roughly 600 BCE-400 CE: of texts that originate in written form. Or reach that state fairly soon, in the time of Greek and Roman classics. It saw the emergence of philosophy as a written search for truth––and this is crucial–– rather than a description or declaration of it. Homer was now envisaged as the archetypal author of a text, a single writer with a distinct ideological project; the triumph of written culture had suppressed all memory of how the Iliad and Odyssey gradually accumulated from several centuries of anonymous oral poets.

The Age of Philosophy ended by the weakening of Imperial Roman authority in the West, and the rise of “scriptural” authority under Constantine “and the eventual hegemony of Christian religious culture” (p. xv).

This had its effect on writing: on things like P-O-V, verifiability, gender, etc. The “official” scriptures of all 3 Abrahamic religions could not be questioned: they were the words of god. Moreover, there was only one god. Except for the Persians, who also had a single god, all the great countries and empires in the 4000 years before the appearance of the Hebrews––had hundreds of gods. This included the Egyptians, the Greeks & Romans, and the half a dozen empires that existed in Mesopotamia before the Abrahamic religions arrived. Though described as transcending every aspect of humanity, divinity in monotheism was treated as male and ruled societies that were thoroughly patriarchal (p xiv).

Well into the later times––some say, from the 4th to the 15th century––both scribal editors and their secular commentators battled each other over these issues. It had become a matter of authenticity: How should people distinguish the single, genuine Word of God from all the competing texts that claimed the deity as their author? How many people, even today, know that the New Testament was written originally and entirely in Greek? (p. 110).

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The Design of Books: An Explainer for Authors, Editors, Agents, and Other Curious Readers

Debbie Berne. Chicago, IL: The University of Chicago Press. 2024. 248 pages, including index.

Index Terms—book design, publishing, typography

Reviewed by Avon Murphy, Principal, Murphy Editing and Writing Services

Debbie Berne wants her readers to share her respect and even passion for the craft of book design: “You may not even be fully aware that books, aside from their covers, are designed” (p. 2). This book isn’t so much a Chicago Manual of Style for designers as it is a wake-up call to writers and editors to comprehend the significance of design in publishing, which Berne pulls off by sharing fine details of the craft.

You have two ways to read the book: You can methodically go through the text chapter after chapter, letting the details accumulate—this is what I did, and the journey was pleasurable. Or you can try using the book as a reference book. The thorough index makes it possible to find exactly where to go.

Berne frequently writes with a strong love for printed books, at times almost anthropomorphizing elements: “Lowercase letters are all arms and legs, not as tidy [as uppercase letters] but easier to pick out due to their more distinctive shapes. Small caps.…make their point without screaming in your ear” (p. 45).

Interesting and memorable are the author’s thoughts about cover design. She revels in enthusiastically delivered, in-depth descriptions of the myriad things to include on a cover, the impact of genre, the “cover brief” that will help the cover designer understand the book, and the craft of color, type, art, and printing effects such as embossed paper and spot colors that produce “a satisfying tactile quality” (p. 89). Berne is clearly enjoying herself.

I’m a veteran of the electronic publishing wars and a heavy reader of online technical books. So I was curious to see what Berne says in the chapter “Ebooks.” My verdict: This chapter is strange. Berne sounds ill at ease, denigrating the concept of ebooks and not supplying the close-up detail found in other chapters. For some reason she focuses on tools for reading ebooks but makes no mention of a tool such as Adobe InDesign, which many of us use to, well, design books. (She does mention InDesign in passing elsewhere.)

The most technicaland to me the most useful—details come in the chapter “Inside the Book.” We hear of “the seemingly small and mostly unrecognized acts of artistry that allow the type to fade away so the story can emerge” (p. 124). These acts include arrangement of the parts of a book, page design, and the setting of type, all handled with fine examples and passion. The accumulation of so many details reminds me of that old publishing standard, Words into Type (3rd ed., 1974). This chapter most definitely fits the book into the Chicago Guides to Writing, Editing, and Publishing series.

The Design of Books: An Explainer for Authors, Editors, Agents, and Other Curious Readers is a publishing insider’s love song to her craft worth relishing.

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